Good job on your speech - I like that you talked about a topic that's personal.
Your flow could have been better, but your pronunciation and fluency were good. You might want to work on your intonation - you were monotone for a lot of the speech and you had to listen hard to tell which sentences were questions. Your inflection was good, though, when you said that you wouldn't have any money, and I think the audience responded well.
Good job - maybe next time don't use a poster, it seemed to give you trouble. (haha)
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Good job on your speech - I like that you talked about a topic that's personal.
Your flow could have been better, but your pronunciation and fluency were good. You might want to work on your intonation - you were monotone for a lot of the speech and you had to listen hard to tell which sentences were questions. Your inflection was good, though, when you said that you wouldn't have any money, and I think the audience responded well.
Good job - maybe next time don't use a poster, it seemed to give you trouble. (haha)
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